I have a collection of several nitpicks regarding the birth process, all served in one post :-)
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The default race, i.e. the race that is chosen after you have chosen sex is Kobold, and the default class is Paladin. These should be Human and Warrior.
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Creating a character
- Mage: add information about gloves and heavy armor reducing SP. I don't know the length limitation for this string, but here are some suggestions:
"Encumbered by gloves/heavy armor"
"Hindered by gloves/heavy armor"
"Hampered by gloves/heavy armor"
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Reword birth options to increase clarity
- Change 'Restrict' to 'Prevent' (except for the ironman option, since that actually only restricts the use of stairs).
- Remove negations.
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The help text for birth_no_stores claims that you won't be able to buy any potions of restore stat. While true, I guess another example could be better.
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The default race, i.e. the race that is chosen after you have chosen sex is Kobold, and the default class is Paladin. These should be Human and Warrior.
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Creating a character
- Mage: add information about gloves and heavy armor reducing SP. I don't know the length limitation for this string, but here are some suggestions:
"Encumbered by gloves/heavy armor"
"Hindered by gloves/heavy armor"
"Hampered by gloves/heavy armor"
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Reword birth options to increase clarity
- Change 'Restrict' to 'Prevent' (except for the ironman option, since that actually only restricts the use of stairs).
Code:
Restrict the use of stores/home -> Prevent the use of stores/home Restrict creation of artifacts -> Prevent creation of artifacts
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Don't stack objects on the floor no -> Stack objects on the floor yes Don't generate connected stairs no -> Generate connected stairs yes Don't show level feelings no -> Show level feelings yes
The help text for birth_no_stores claims that you won't be able to buy any potions of restore stat. While true, I guess another example could be better.
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